Poptart tragedy alternate ending

I was so sad when I saw the poptart tragedy so I decided to make an alternate ending. I did make many mistakes
Translation:
Boy says WAIT!
Girl says What?
Boy says I don't want to be your boyfriend because I want to be your husband!
He opened the poptart and a beautiful diamond ring was inside
Girl gasps and says I wanna be your wife!
Boy says you made me so happy!
The end.